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The way you wrote this is so real. This happens to me a lot and I can feel the memories just filling in. The way you wrote it is like your going through this ( Which I know you not )... and it's like I'm witnessing the whole thing. It has a very sad and longing feeling to it. But the way you expressed what the person goes through is spectacular. I also like how you typed it, the descending style is great! Great job. Keep up the amazing literature skills. I can't wait to read more of your work and writings!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Professional Writer
I'll have to see what my brain comes up with next then ;3

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Kawaii-Fruit-Cake Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
And I can't wait until then. (;
If only I could write as good as you!~~
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Professional Writer
Keep practising and one day you will. After all, I taught myself ^^ I didn't go to any classes or anything xD

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Kawaii-Fruit-Cake Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha I will. I am in honors English so that might help...
But your an amazing writer. (:
Fedora Pirates? xD
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Kawaii-Fruit-Cake Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
And I can't wait. (;
Hehe Fedora Pirates. x)
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