The way you wrote this is so real. This happens to me a lot and I can feel the memories just filling in. The way you wrote it is like your going through this ( Which I know you not )... and it's like I'm witnessing the whole thing. It has a very sad and longing feeling to it. But the way you expressed what the person goes through is spectacular. I also like how you typed it, the descending style is great! Great job. Keep up the amazing literature skills. I can't wait to read more of your work and writings!